Hi Jai. I am Angus from Wainui Beach School, from your tuhi mai tuhi atu classroom, Room 1. I really like the way you have listed your ingredients so they follow the procedural text correctly. I like how you have left me hanging by saying; "Will the hanging crystals hang on a cloud?" Although you have left out a question mark at "Will the hanging crystals hang on a cloud?" I would also recommed you to change your background colour because after looking at some of your other blogs it is very hard to read them. From Angus
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ReplyDeleteHi Jai. I am Angus from Wainui Beach School, from your tuhi mai tuhi atu classroom, Room 1. I really like the way you have listed your ingredients so they follow the procedural text correctly. I like how you have left me hanging by saying; "Will the hanging crystals hang on a cloud?" Although you have left out a question mark at "Will the hanging crystals hang on a cloud?" I would also recommed you to change your background colour because after looking at some of your other blogs it is very hard to read them.
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hi Angus thanks for the comment.
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